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윤영선/2024-04-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I don't like living on the main street. I prefer flat land to high buildings. In my opinion, the best place to raise a family is a place with good sunlight and wind, a small yard, sidewalks around the house, and a stable, quiet neighborhood. Also, it would be better if public transportation was convenient.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I can imagine your description, Mia. A stable and quiet neighborhood is an ideal place to raise a family. Very good!

-Khai

I don't like living on the main street.

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>> I prefer not to have my house on the main road.

I prefer flat land to high buildings.

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>> I would choose a flat land over a high building.

In my opinion, the best place to raise a family is a place with good sunlight and wind, a small yard, sidewalks around the house, and a stable, quiet neighborhood.

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>> For me, the best place to raise a family is a house that gets good sunlight and wind. Also, it would be good if it had a small yard and sidewalks around the house. Lastly, a stable and quiet neighborhood.

Also, it would be better if public transportation was convenient.

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>> It is a plus if the public transportation in the area is also convenient.