Ȳ/2024-04-08
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Seong Eun,
I wanted to reach out and express my appreciation for
your openness in sharing your experiences. It's not always easy to talk about
our challenges, so I commend your courage. Navigating friendships and
relationships, especially during our teenage years, can be quite the journey.
I'm impressed by the proactive steps you took to overcome these obstacles, such
as journaling, meditation, and even making notes on social interactions. Though
the solutions you tried didn't yield immediate results, your perseverance
shines through. Recognizing when additional support is needed, like seeking
medication, reflects a mature understanding of self-care. Your journey is a
testament to your resilience and willingness to grow. Remember, progress isn't
always linear, and seeking assistance along the way is a sign of strength.
~Teacher Cathy
I think I have never solved my
problem on my own.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I've never managed to
solve my problems independently.
My biggest problem in my teenage
was that I was in difficult in making friends and maintaining relationships.
>>My biggest problem in my
teenage was that I was having difficulty making friends and maintaining
relationships.
I was afraid of talking to
people and I thought people would not like me.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Social anxiety plagued
me, as I feared rejection and believed others wouldn't accept me.
So I did many things to overcome
this.
>>CORRECT
OR>>To tackle this issue, I
attempted various strategies.
I did Journaling and meditation,
I tried to smile, I did exercises and I took notes about how to behave in front
of others and so on.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I experimented with
journaling, meditation, smiling more often, engaging in physical exercise, and
even studying proper social behavior.
But none of them worked maybe
because I didn't do them constantly or maybe it was not a problem that I can
solve.
>>But none of them worked
maybe because I didn't do them constantly or maybe it was not a problem that I
could solve.
I took some medicine and it
solved my problem.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Ultimately, I found
relief through medication.
In conclusion, I didn't solve
that problem on my own.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Hence, I didn't
overcome this obstacle on my own.