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What are the things that you don't like about your city and why? If none, why?

신봉규/2024-04-08

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the thing that i don't like my city is a lot of people. it is difficult that too many people are crowded into a small space.
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the thing that i don't like my city is a lot of people. it is difficult that too many people are crowded into a small space.

>> The thing that I don't like about my city is that it's very crowded and it gives us a hard time moving around in small spaces. 
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