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Do you believe in meraids?

박준현/2024-04-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No I don't believe in mermaids. I don't belieeve mermads becase I think the mermaids are just a imagenaion. But the mermaids I think they look like preety. Lastly, I think some mermens and mermaids look preety and some are not. These are the reason why I don't believe in mermaids.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

No, I don't believe in mermaids.
>> CORRECT!
I don't belieeve mermads becase I think the mermaids are just a imagenaion.
>> I don't believe in mermadds because I think mermaids are just in my imagination.
But the mermaids I think they look like preety.
>> But I think mermaids look pretty.
Lastly, I think some mermens and mermaids look preety and some are not.
>> Lastly, I think some mermen and mermaids look pretty, but some are not.
These are the reasons why I don't believe in mermaids.
>> CORRECT!
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