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김수희/2024-04-08

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On Tuesday April 4th Today I bought clothes. four black T-shirts and one gray T-shrit. and then I back home I started YouTube excercise. It was so hard but I felt very good. Dinner also very yummy. I finished my arcademey homework and another homework . I felt today was very nice day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Mary! Great job on buying new clothes and exercising! Finishing your homework is awesome. Keep up the good work!

~T. Jenna

Today I bought clothes.

>>Today, I bought clothes.

>>Today, I went shopping and purchased some new clothes for myself.

four black T-shirts and one gray T-shrit.

>>I got four black t-shirts and one gray t-shirt.

and then I back home I started YouTube excercise.

>>After shopping, I went back home and started a YouTube workout/exercise.

It was so hard, but I felt very good.

Correct, or

>>It was challenging, but I felt really good afterward.

Dinner also very yummy.

>>After working out, I had my dinner which was very yummy/delicious/delectable.

I finished my arcademey homework and another homework .

>> Right after my dinner, I finished my academy homework and another assignment.

I felt today was very nice day.

>>I felt that today was a very nice day.

>>I felt that today was an exceptionally pleasant day.