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April 5th's homework

안연희/2024-04-08

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I woke up 6am and my mother and i visited as soon as the election office opened. Because it will be crowded and waiting after 9am, so we decided to visit early. There were not a few diligent people. I had to vote for each a ballot twice. One was for proportional representation and another was for member of the national assembly. When i back home, i slept again.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi,

Thanks for sharing about your election experience. I think it's wise to wake up early especially when it comes to these kind of events. It's funny how you went back to sleep after voting. I would do the same too. ^^

-Teacher Ash

I woke up 6am and my mother and i visited as soon as the election office opened.

>> I woke up at 6 am. My mom and I went to the election office as soon as it opened.

Because it will be crowded and waiting after 9am, so we decided to visit early.

>> It is because it will be crowded after 9 am so, we decided to go there early.

There were not a few diligent people.

>> There were a few people who came earlier.

I had to vote for each a ballot twice.

>> I had to vote twice.

One was for proportional representation and another was for member of the national assembly.

>>One was for a political party and the other was for a member of the national assembly.

When i back home, i slept again.

>> I went back to sleep as soon as I got home.