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김동아/2024-04-08

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I has the money the best in my birthday. I think It's the best things the birthday present. Anyone is agreement about money.

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Hi, Ena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best! :)
~ T. Camille

I has the money the best in my birthday.

>> Having money on your birthday is the best gift for me.

I think It's the best things the birthday present.

>> I think it's the best birthday present.

Anyone is agreement about money.

>> Anyone would agree about money as the best birthday present.