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What is the strangest food you have ever eaten?ㅑㅜ

맹준영/2024-04-07

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when i went to Cambodia as volunteer at 22, I was ate a fruit called doorian. before ate a doorian, I was searched that. that is called fruits of king. I look forward to doorian taste. but when i was ate it, smell was terrible and I counnt't remember what is taste, because smell was powerful. Now after ten years, I can't eat doorian yet. Next time, If i have a chance, i will have to challange for eat doorian
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Hi, Jun! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
when i went to Cambodia as volunteer at 22, I was ate a fruit called doorian.
>> When I went to Cambodia as a volunteer at 22, I ate a fruit called durian.
before ate a doorian, I was searched that.
>> Before eating durian, I searched for information about it. 
that is called fruits of king.
>> It's called the 'fruit of kings.
I look forward to doorian taste. 
>> I looked forward to the taste of durian.
but when i was ate it, smell was terrible and I counnt't remember what is taste, because smell was powerful.
>>  But when I ate it, the smell was terrible, and I couldn't remember what it tasted like because the smell was so overpowering.
Now after ten years, I can't eat doorian yet.
>> Now, after ten years, I still can't eat durian.
Next time, If i have a chance, i will have to challange for eat doorian
>> Next time, if I have the chance, I will have to challenge myself to eat durian.
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