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What is your favorite liquor brand?

김일환/2024-04-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like Japanese alcohols, we call it 'Sake'. More than 100 companies have make Sake. Although, I love Sake, I don't know what brand's Sake I have drunk. I like Sake which doesn't have chemical alcohols. That kind of Sake more expensive than other. When I have a chance to visit duty free shop. I try to buy it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

Oh, good! From what I've heard, Daiginjo is considered the most premium style of sake. You have a sweet tooth, so I recommend Nigori sake, which has a bold and fruity flavor. You may have tried it, though. ^^

~ Trixia

Content:

I like Japanese alcohols, we call it 'Sake'.

- I like Japanese alcohol; we call it 'Sake'.

More than 100 companies have make Sake.

- More than 100 companies make sake.

Although, I love Sake, I don't know what brand's Sake I have drunk.

- Although I love Sake, I don't know what Sake brands I have drunk.

I like Sake which doesn't have chemical alcohols.

- I like Sake, which doesn't have chemical alcohols.

That kind of Sake more expensive than other.

- That kind of sake is more expensive than others.

When I have a chance to visit duty free shop. I try to buy it.

- CORRECT.