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장지혁/2024-04-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I agree with Haze's opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is a lot of information and I can find information in live.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

Thanks for sharing you insights! The vast amount of information available on the Internet and the ability to access it in real-time are definitely its greatest advantages.

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Haze's opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is a lot of information and I can find information in live.

>> I agree with Hazel's opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is the abundance of information, and I can access it in real-time.