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신봉규/2024-04-05

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the best thing in my city is many hospital. because the contryside in Korea has not hospital. you must go seoul if you are sick

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the best thing in my city is many hospital.

>>> The best thing about my city is the numerous and advanced hospitals that we have.

because the contryside in Korea has not hospital. you must go seoul if you are sick

>>> The countryside of Korea don't have this kind of facility yet and people from those places must go to Seoul if they are severely ill.