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류건우/2024-04-05
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What do you think old age is like?
A: I think old age is a peaceful period of life.
I think there's less things to do if they're old because they don't need to work, or usually they don't even need to do chores.
So, I think people would be peaceful if they're old.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think there's less things to do if they're old because they don't need to work, or usually they don't even need to do chores.
3. So, I think people would be peaceful if they're old.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think old age is a peaceful period of life.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think there's less things to do if they're old because they don't need to work, or usually they don't even need to do chores.
>>I think there are lesser things to do if they're old because they don't need to work, or usually they don't even need to do the chores.
3. So, I think people would be peaceful if they're old.
>>So, I think people would be peaceful once they're old.
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