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Do you remember all your dreams?

박준현/2024-04-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Of couse I don't remember all of my dreams. I just remember nightmare of a bee. I just remember that because I think it's a nightmare. And also I once staed up all night. I was 7years old. Did you staed up all night? Is it once? or many times? These are the reason why I don't remember all of my dreams.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

Of couse I don't remember all of my dreams.

>> CORRECT!
I just remember nightmare of a bee.

>> I just remember my nightmare about bees.

I just remember that because I think it's a nightmare.

>> CORRECT!
And also I once staed up all night.

>> And also, I once stayed up all night.

I was 7 years old.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I was 7 years old at that time.

Did you staed up all night?

>> Did you stay up all night?

OR >> Have you tried staying up all night?

Is it once? Or many times?

>> CORRECT!

These are the reasons why I don't remember all of my dreams.

>> CORRECT!