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장민석/2024-04-05

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Homework ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.) > What is your favorite weekend activity? How often do you do it? My favorite weekend activity is just walking and talking go outside with someone like girlfriend or friends.Maybe I think every week I doing it

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Thank you for this Jade!

My favorite weekend activity is just walking and talking go outside with someone like girlfriend or friends.

>>> My favorite weekend activity is just walking and going out to hang out with someone like girlfriend or friends.

Maybe I think every week I doing it

>>> I think I probably do it every week.