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이진태/2024-04-05

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I prefer a beach than a mountain. Because, I like a swim. So, I usually go to beach place when I go to a vacation

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Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion about this topic. I hope you get to have more beach vacations this year.

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I prefer a beach than a mountain. Because, I like a swim.

>> I prefer a beach to a mountain because I like to swim.

So, I usually go to beach place when I go to a vacation

>>So, I usually go to beach destinations when I go on vacation.