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What do you usually order in your favorite restaurant?

맹준영/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

First of all, My favorite food is Japanese food. So, I go to a Japanese restaurant once a week. my best food is Ramen. Ramen is very delicious and taste so clearly. and price is cheaper than other main dishs. If i go to a Japanese restaurant with my visitors, I always eat sushi. Sushi is main dish that combine rice and fish or egg or meat. It is so delicious but too expensive. So i eat sushi once a month.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jun! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia

First of all, My favorite food is Japanese food.

>> Correct

So, I go to a Japanese restaurant once a week.

>> Correct

my best food is Ramen.

>> My best food is Ramen.

Ramen is very delicious and taste so clearly. and price is cheaper than other main dishs.

>> Ramen is very delicious and has a clear taste, and the price is cheaper than other main dishes.

If I go to a Japanese restaurant with my visitors, I always eat sushi.

>> Correct

Sushi is main dish that combine rice and fish or egg or meat.

>> Sushi is a main dish that combines rice with fish, egg, or meat.

It is so delicious but too expensive.

>> Correct

So i eat sushi once a month.

>> Therefore, I eat sushi once a month.