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김지숙/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I were the president, I would increase welfare facilities for the health of the people because if there are many welfare facilities, people can go whenever their health is bad.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
That's very thoughtful of you, Eric! I think you would make a great president of your country someday. 
~Teacher Harmony <3

If I were the president, I would increase welfare facilities for the health of the people because if there are many welfare facilities, people can go whenever their health is bad.
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