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To prefer to be a leader than a follower

최응환/2024-04-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I would like to be a leader. I actually moved to my job to be the leader. I had worked for the top company in the same field. Even though I chose current company for achieving my goal.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thomas!
They said that a good leader is a good follower. I guess you have good qualities that make you a good leader now.
Thank you for writing your thoughts.
T. Aki~


I would like to be a leader.
>> CORRECT!

I actually moved to my job to be the leader.
>> I actually moved to a job to become a leader.

I had worked for the top company in the same field.
>> CORRECT!

Even though I chose current company for achieving my goal.
>>>  Even though I chose my current company to achieve my goal.
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