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When are the best times for silence? Some people say that silence is boring. Do you agree?

박소은/2024-04-04

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I think the best times for silence is when others is silence and I don't think that silence is boring because when we be silence I feel at ease But when we be silence a long time I think it will be little bit boring.

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Hi Sunny!

We're almost at the end of the week.

Keep your will to continue practicing.

Let's make our class tomorrow useful and effective.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think the best times for silence is when others is silence and I don't think that silence is boring because when we be silence I feel at ease.

>> I think the best time for silence is when others are silent and I don't think that silence is boring because when I am silent, I feel at ease.

But when we be silence a long time I think it will be little bit boring.

>> However, when I am silent for a long time, I think it will be a little bit boring.