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류건우/2024-04-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What is your idea of a good marriage?
A: I think good marriage is not the timing but the partner.
The timing would matter if the person's too old or young, but actually what matters is the partner because the personality is important.
Also, the manner of himself or herself is important.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. The timing would matter if the person's too old or young, but actually what matters is the partner because the personality is important.
3. Also, the manner of himself or herself is important.
Thank you for answering your homework question!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think good marriage is not the timing but the partner.
>>I think good marriage is not about the timing, but the partner.
2. The timing would matter if the person's too old or young, but actually what matters is the partner because the personality is important.
>>The timing would matter if the person's too old or young, but actually what matters is the partner's personality.
3. Also, the manner of himself or herself is important.
>>Also, his/her manner is important.
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