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Have you ever experienced having a bad dream?

박준현/2024-04-03

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Yes I had a nightmare. It's a bee nightmare. At the dream, first, I touch the beehive. Second, then the bees came out to the beehive. Lastly, the bees shot very many times. Then, I screamed, family all wouk up. These are I ever experienced haved a nightmare.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

Yes I had a nightmare.

>> CORRECT!
It's a bee nightmare.

>> It's a nightmare about bees.

At the dream, first, I touch the beehive.

>> In my dream, I first touched the beehive.

Second, then the bees came out to the beehive.

>> Second, the bees came out of the beehive.

OR >> And then, the bees came out of the beehive.

Lastly, the bees shot very many times.

>> Lastly, the bees stung me many times.

Then, I screamed, family all wouk up.

>> Then, I screamed, that made all of my family members wake up.

These are I ever experienced haved a nightmare.

>> This was the nightmare I have experienced.