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Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?

박성진/2024-04-03

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In environmental dimension, it is good to use not private car but public transport. If every people use private car, air pollution will be worse. But government has to balance with demend and price of fee. *in Korea, some public transport are run by goverment and they decide the price.
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Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
In environmental dimension, it is good to use not private car but public transport.
>> In terms of environmental impact, using public transport instead of a private car is beneficial.
If every people use private car, air pollution will be worse.
>> If everyone uses private cars, air pollution will be worse.
But government has to balance with demend and price of fee.
>> But the government has to balance demand with the price of the fee.
*in Korea, some public transport are run by goverment and they decide the price.
>> In Korea, some public transport is run by the government, and they decide the price.
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