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김동아/2024-04-03

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I had a spring picnic from low the mountain climb up with classmate. I remember that play the hide-and-(go-)seek and ate the gimbap with classmate.

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Hi, Ena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best! :)
~ T. Camille

I had a spring picnic from low the mountain climb up with classmate.

>> In the spring season, I went on a picnic in the low mountains with my classmate.

I remember that play the hide-and-(go-)seek and ate the gimbap with classmate.

>> I remember, we used to play hide-and-seek and eat gimbap together.