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My feeling when I advise to other people

최응환/2024-04-03

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I feel nothing to advice to other one. Because When I give some choices for them If they do not accept that, I might be upset it. I know If I feel upset It must be geerd.
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Hello Thomas!
Agree with your point. People voice out their thoughts but not necessarily asking for a piece of advice. However, it is natural for us, humans to give our thoughts even when we are not asked because we thought that it is what they need.
Have a good afternoon!
T. Aki~

I feel nothing to advice to other one.
>>> I feel like I have nothing to advise anyone.

Because When I give some choices for them If they do not accept that, I might be upset it.
>>> Because When I give some choices for them If they do not accept that, I might be upset with it.

 I know If I feel upset It must be geerd.
>>>  I know If I feel upset It must be geerd.

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