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김순님/2024-04-03
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The circumstance of world is changing fast.
Young generation would learn new technology and produce new things and skill.
Because people throw away the old stuffs and use the new stuffs
The young labor force leads nation development for long time.
If the young generation get disappear
The future of country couldn’t exist.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Ms. Sunny!
This is one of the most challenging situations that your country is facing now. I hope you will be able to overcome this before it is too late.
Have a great day!
Aki~
The circumstance of world is changing fast.
>>> The circumstances of the world are changing fast.
Young generation would learn new technology and produce new things and skill.
>>> The young generation would learn new technology and produce new things and skills.
Because people throw away the old stuffs and use the new stuffs
>>> People discard old items and opt for new ones.
The young labor force leads nation development for long time.
>>> The young labor force has led national development for a long time.
If the young generation get disappear
>>> If the young generation disappear
The future of country couldn’t exist.
>>> The future of the country couldn’t exist.
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