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장지혁/2024-04-02

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I agree with Natalie's opinion because I think makeup can make people confident and feel good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

Good idea. In a way, makeup has the power to boost confidence and make people feel good about themselves.

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Natalie's opinion because I think makeup can make people confident and feel good.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I share Natalie's viewpoint as I believe makeup can instill confidence and uplift one's mood.