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김도연/2024-04-02

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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about "What would you feel if someone were racist against your county?” If they are not violent, I will ignore them. I don't think they’re worth people who judge me just based on my nationality. If they use violence, I will call the police.

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Hi, Jessica!

Thank you so much for answering your homework :)

I really appreciate it!

Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)

YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

-T.NIKKI ^^

If they are not violent, I will ignore them.

>> CORRECT!

OR>> If they are not violent to me, I will just ignore them.

I don't think they’re worth people who judge me just based on my nationality.

>> I also don't think that people judge me by just my nationality.

If they use violence, I will call the police.

>> However, if they use violence, I will call the police.