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김지숙/2024-04-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I snore when I sleep because if I sleep with a person who sleeps while snoring, it's too noisy and I can't sleep well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for sharing your perspective, Eric.

It shows consideration for others' sleep quality, which is important for a harmonious environment. Keep being mindful of how your actions affect those around you!

~Teacher Harmony <3

I snore when I sleep because if I sleep with a person who sleeps while snoring, it's too noisy and I can't sleep well.

>> CORRECT!