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Q: How do you make sure to keep confidential information? Do you think your company has enough security for customer data ? A: Yes i think our company has enough security for customer data. Because most of huge data file cannot be attached on an email. And our company's security department always remind employees to prevent the exposure of confidential information.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Peter! I am glad to know that your customers' information are secured. I hope all companies have the same level of security. See you again!
--Teacher Anji

A: Yes i think our company has enough security for customer data. Because most of huge data file cannot be attached on an email.
And our company's security department always remind employees to prevent the exposure of confidential information.
>> A: Yes, I think our company has enough security for customer data because most of the huge data files cannot be attached to an email. Additionally, our company's security department always reminds employees to prevent the exposure of confidential information.
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