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김규원/2024-04-01

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I like badminton the most. This is because the ball is light, so there is almost no risk of getting hurt. It is also exercise because you use your body a lot.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your first corrected composition for this week, Luna.

I appreciate your sending it. See you on Wednesday!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What's the most enjoyable sport for you? Explain your answer.

I like badminton the most.

>> OR: I enjoy playing badminton the most.

This is because the ball is light, so there is almost no risk of getting hurt.

>> CORRECT~~

It is also exercise because you use your body a lot.

>> Playing badminton is also an exercise because you use your body a lot.