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류건우/2024-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: Do you think being an athlete is in a person's nature? Or can it be learned? A: I think it can be learned. People sometimes get motivated by something and they become an athlete, or it can also be a person's nature. But I think it's usually a person's talent.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework! Keep up the good work.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I think it can be learned.
>>CORRECT!

2. People sometimes get motivated by something and they become an athlete, or it can also be a person's nature.
>>People sometimes get motivated by something, and that helps them become an athlete, or it can also be a person's nature.

3. But I think it's usually a person's talent.
>>However, I think it's usually a person's talent.

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