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HOMEWORK: Write a composition about your favorite activity with your parents.

이하은/2024-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have to my plan in usually with my parents. first, we woke up slowly during the day. ans we order iunch by elivery (my mom and i am not good at cooking) after digesting watched tv, we go for a walk with my dog to park neast my house after a long walk outside l come back home, when the sun goes down it's plan is my favorite plan.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Eve!

It flutters my heart whenever I see you include your pets as family members. I also have dogs, too so my heart is really close to them... I hope you have many moments to share with your family<3

Chammy

I have to my plan in usually with my parents.
>> I have a usual plan that I follow with my parents.

first, we woke up slowly during the day.
>>First, we wake up slowly during the day.

>>In the morning, we first get up gradually.

ans we order iunch by elivery (my mom and i am not good at cooking)

>>Then, we order lunch for delivery (my mom and I are not good at cooking).

>>Since my mom and I are not good cooks, we order lunch for delivery.
after digesting watched tv, we go for a walk with my dog to park neast my house
>>After eating, we watch TV and then go for a walk with my dog to the park near my house.

after a long walk outside l come back home, when the sun goes down
>>After a long walk, we come back home when the sun goes down.

it's plan is my favorite plan.

>>This plan is my favorite.