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김지숙/2024-03-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

The best gift I received is the expensive sharp that my parents bought me because all the other gifts are good, but I keep using this sharp well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

It's great to see you treasuring the gift your parents gave you. I'm sure they'd be happy to know that!

~Teacher Harmony <3

The best gift I received is the expensive sharp that my parents bought me because all the other gifts are good, but I keep using this sharp well.

>> CORRECT!