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류건우/2024-03-28

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Q: Do you think people will stop using cash in the future? Why or why not? A: I think they might, but I think it will be a far future. People still use cash because it can be easily trusted and it's safer because it's harder to be stolen. Also, I think there are a lot more advantages of using cash.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think they might, but I think it will be a far future.
>>I think they might, but I think it will be in a far future.

2. People still use cash because it can be easily trusted and it's safer because it's harder to be stolen.
>>CORRECT!

3. Also, I think there are a lot more advantages of using cash.
>>Also, I think there are a lot more advantages in using cash.

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