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하민지/2024-03-28

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HOMEWORK: [Creative Writing] If you could eat only one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Why? Kindly answer in no more than five (5) sentences. if i could eat only one food for the rest of my life, i will eating Kimchi fried rice. i like eat pork,chicken,ramen etc. but i think i'm sick of it. i usually like eat kimchi fried rice. maybe i think can eat longer than other foods.
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Hi, Min Ji!
(^__^)

Food is one of the basic necessities of life.

Food contains nutrients - substances essential for the growth, repair, and maintenance of body tissues and for the regulation of vital processes.

My kids and I also like kimchi-fried rice. It's delicious and easy to make.
Thank you for this composition. I will see you again in our next class.

Have a good weekend!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


if i could eat only one food for the rest of my life, i will eating Kimchi fried rice.
>>> If I could eat only one food for the rest of my life, I would eat kimchi fried rice.
i like eat pork,chicken,ramen etc. but i think i'm sick of it.
>>> I like to eat pork, chicken, ramen, etc., but I think I'm sick of it.
i usually like eat kimchi fried rice.
>>> I usually like to eat kimchi-fried rice.
maybe i think can eat longer than other foods.
>>> Maybe I can eat longer than other foods.

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