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오서현/2024-03-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

It is yes. Because when people haven’t goals they probably lose the way. So we need set a goals.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Seo Hyeon!

It is yes.

>>> It is a yes.

>>> OR: The answer is a yes.
Because when people haven’t goals they probably lose the way.

>>> Because when people don't have goals, they'll probably lose the way.

So we need set a goals.

>>> So we need to set a goal.