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하민지/2024-03-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Happy thursday teacher~! HOMEWORK: [Writing Task] In three to five sentences (3-5), talk about the story or news you last listened to. Use as many adjectives as you can. i recently saw crime news in online. it is that the boyfriend kill his girlfriend. it was really cruel. it started with argyment. continuously he claim it is unplanned murder.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Min Ji!

Thank you for answering your homeowork. I've read it well.
Don't forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence.

I will talk to you again on Monday. Have a good weekend!

Practice English whenever you can.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


i recently saw crime news in online.
>>> I recently saw crime news online.
[CAPITALIZE]
it is that the boyfriend kill his girlfriend.
>>> It's about a boyfriend who killed his girlfriend.
it was really cruel.
>>> It was really cruel.
[CAPITALIZE]
it started with argyment.
>>> It started with an argument.
continuously he claim it is unplanned murder.
>>>  Continuously, he claims it is unplanned murder.
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