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신봉규/2024-03-27

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I want to visit Australia because my friend of high school lives in Australia. I can't see my friend for a long time

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I want to visit Australia because my friend of high school lives in Australia.

>> I want to visit Australia someday because my high-school friend lives there.

I can't see my friend for a long time

>> I can't wait to see him because it's been a long time since the last time we met.