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황지혜/2024-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. Moving in is really difficult from moving in, and it's stressful because you have to figure out where you live. 2. When you move, you have to think about your living environment. Check for water pressure or defect repair problems. And you should check the streets of convenience facilities and the surrounding environment nearby.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jihye!
Moving in can indeed be quite challenging and stressful, especially when figuring out your new living arrangements. 
Good job on this!
~ Teacher Maxine

Moving in is really difficult from moving in, and it's stressful because you have to figure out where you live.
>> Moving in is really difficult and stressful because you have to figure out where you will live.

When you move, you have to think about your living environment.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When you move, you need to consider your living environment.

Check for water pressure or defect repair problems.
>> Check for water pressure issues or defects that need repairs.

And you should check the streets of convenience facilities and the surrounding environment nearby.
>> Also, assess the convenience of nearby facilities and the surrounding environment.
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