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Travel back in time

박소율/2024-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I could travel back in time, I would go to in 2022. Because, I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at the time. Also, that was the most fun time in school. My friends were good and fun. And I enjoyed to play because the next year, I was in the middle school. Therefore, I want to go back in 2022.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Julie. Well done on accomplishing your homework. Here are some corrections for clarification of the thoughts and grammar.
^^T. Ara

If I could travel back in time, I would go to in 2022.

>>> If I could travel back in time, I would go back to 2022
Because, I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at the time.

>>> because I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at that time.
Also, that was the most fun time in school.

>>> It was the most fun time in school for me.
My friends were good and fun.

>>> My friends were good and fun,
And I enjoyed to play because the next year, I was in the middle school.

>>> and I enjoyed playing because the next year, I entered middle school.
Therefore, I want to go back in 2022.

>>> CORRECT!!