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Which greeting kinds of annoys you?

이승민/2024-03-27

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Once i was waling down the street, a group of people was asking pedestrian to answer question investigation. The purpose of investigation was “save the earth” or “help poor children”. At the end of the investigation, they asked me to sign up charity, but I wasn’t earning money, so I refused ti. Then they asked me to write my name, phone number, address on the list to show that I agree with their argument. I was sorry for refusing to join charity, so i wrote down my information. And since then, I got a bunch of spam messages and calls. So greeting such as “Hi? Can you join our survey?” Is little bit annoying.

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Thank you for this Seung Min!

Once i was waling down the street, a group of people was asking pedestrian to answer question investigation.

>>> Once I was walking down the street, a group of people was asking pedestrians to answer survey questions.

The purpose of investigation was “save the earth” or “help poor children”.

>>> The purpose of the survey/investigation was to “save the earth” or “help poor children”.

At the end of the investigation, they asked me to sign up charity, but I wasn’t earning money, so I refused ti.

>>> At the end of the survey/investigation, they asked me to sign up for charity, but I wasn’t earning money, so I refused it.

Then they asked me to write my name, phone number, address on the list to show that I agree with their argument.

>>> correct

I was sorry for refusing to join the charity, so I wrote down my information.

>>> correct

And since then, I got a bunch of spam messages and calls.

>>> correct
So greeting such as “Hi? Can you join our survey?” Is little bit annoying.

>>> So a greeting such as “Hi? Can you join our survey?” is a little bit annoying.