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HOMEWORK: How difficult do you think it is to live as a handicapped?
이하은/2024-03-27
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
i was a time, when i couldn't hear well in one ear.
it's not i didn't hear it all. but that was very sncomfortable.
so i know that feeling a little bit.
maybe very inconvenient to live.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Eve.
I liked how you expressed your opinion while not being in that situation. To be honest, I appreciate the handicapped for surviving each day despite the difficulties they endure. Life is difficult enough for normal people, imagine how much more challenging it is for those with disabilities... :/ Generally, people should constantly be kind to one another because we don't know what they're going through...
I liked how you expressed your opinion while not being in that situation. To be honest, I appreciate the handicapped for surviving each day despite the difficulties they endure. Life is difficult enough for normal people, imagine how much more challenging it is for those with disabilities... :/ Generally, people should constantly be kind to one another because we don't know what they're going through...
Chammy
i was a time, when i couldn't hear well in one ear.
>> There was a time that I couldn't hear well in my one ear.
>> There was a time that I couldn't hear well in my one ear.
it's not i didn't hear it all. but that was very sncomfortable.
>> It's not that I couldn't hear anything at all but it was so uncomfortable.
>> It's not that I couldn't hear anything at all but it was so uncomfortable.
so i know that feeling a little bit.
>> So, I somehow know how it feels.
>> So, I somehow know how it feels.
maybe very inconvenient to live.
>> Maybe it is very inconvenient to live.
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