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권경희/2024-03-27

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The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life. But in my opinion, ti is not the problem carb itself. I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems. Carb is not a crime.
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Ms. Lily!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework and providing thoughtful answers to the questions. I enjoy reading homework assignments because they often provide personal insights that are not found in the textbook. Your effort and attention to detail are greatly appreciated. Thank you again!
T. Aki~

The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life.
>>> A low-carb diet might be a good practice for a healthy life.

But in my opinion, it is not the problem carbs itself.
>>> CORRECT!

I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems.
>>> CORRECT!

Carb is not a crime.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Carb is not the culprit.

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