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김순님/2024-03-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
People usually stare at someone who is good or wired or request the answer. When I was student If student contact to teacher. They have to pronounce right answer or presentate opinion. I didn’t smart and didn’t know the right answer. Untill now I am not courageouse.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Ms. SUnny!
Thank you for submitting your homework and providing detailed answers to the questions. I enjoy reading homework because it feels more personal and I learn things not covered in the book. Thank you!
T. Aki~

People usually stare at someone who is good or wired or request the answer.
>>> People usually stare at someone good or weird or request the answer.

When I was student If student contact to teacher.
>>> When I was a student and  If a student contacted the teacher.

They have to pronounce right answer or presentate opinion.
>>> They have to pronounce the right answer or present an opinion.

I didn’t smart and didn’t know the right answer.
>>> I wasn’t smart and didn’t know the right answer.

Untill now I am not courageous.
>>> Until now I am not courageous.

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