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Whats the most memorable vacation youve had? - When i was 22,I went to cambodia as volunteer with my church Friends. I Stayed in cambodia for ten days. i was very hard. because the weather was very hot and moist. that was very hard vacation, but i feel many thing during help many people. if i have chance, i want to go there as volunteer one more time.
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Hi, Jun! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
When i was 22,I went to cambodia as volunteer with my church Friends.
>> When I was 22, I went to Cambodia as a volunteer with my church friends.
I Stayed in cambodia for ten days.
>> I stayed in Cambodia for ten days
i was very hard. because the weather was very hot and moist.
>> It was very hard for me because the weather was very hot and humid.
that was very hard vacation, but i feel many thing during help many people.
>> That was a very challenging vacation, but I experienced many things while helping many people.
if i have chance, i want to go there as volunteer one more time.
>> If I have the chance, I want to go there as a volunteer one more time.