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What do you usually do with your friends?

차진혁/2024-03-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I usally play mobile games and watching movies together with my friends in my home. But l don't have many friends near my house, so I'm don't play with my friends often.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jimmy!

Please find below your edited compostion. Also, take note of the corrected sentences. Speak to you tomorrow!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What do you usually do with your friends?

I usally play mobile games and watching movies together with my friends in my home.
>> I usually play mobile games and watch movies at home together with my friends.

But l don't have many friends near my house, so I'm don't play with my friends often.
>> But I don't have many friends near my house so I don't play with them often.