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Which country is your favorite sports player from? Why do you like this athlete?

차유진/2024-03-26

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My favorite sports player is Son Heung-min, he is from South Korea. I like him because he is a good soccer player, famous, he is from Korea like me.
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         Which country is your favorite sports player from? Why do you like this athlete?



My favorite sports player is Son Heung-min, he is from South Korea.
>> OR: Son Heung-min is my favorite athlete and he's from South Korea. 

I like him because he is a good soccer player, famous, he is from Korea like me.
>> I like him because he's a good soccer player, famous, and from South Korea just like me. 


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