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황지혜/2024-03-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1. Why do you work out? I'm doing it to be healthy. 2.The gym and the walkway are the best.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jihye!

That's great! Taking care of your health is important.

~ Teacher Maxine

I'm doing it to be healthy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I do it for health reasons.

The gym and the walkway are the best.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The gym and walking paths are excellent options.