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What desserts from other countries would you like to try?

박준현/2024-03-26

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I'd like to eat France, U.S.A and U.K. I want to try Fance dessert because the Fance's food is very tasty. And U.S.A's dessert is I think is like a strawberry cake. Lastly U.K is I know fish and chips, the fish and chips are I most expentation that dessert. Maybe that's not a dessert. These are I like to try these country's dessert.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I'd like to eat France, U.S.A and U.K.

>> I'd like to eat the desserts from France, the U.S.A and the U.K.

I want to try Fance dessert because the Fance's food is very tasty.

>> I want to try French desserts because food from France are very tasty.

And U.S.A's dessert is I think is like a strawberry cake.

>> And for the U.S.A's dessert, I think I would like to try their strawberry cake.

Lastly U.K is I know fish and chips, the fish and chips are I most expentation that dessert.

>> Lastly, the U.K is known for fish and chips, the fish and chips is what I expect the most more than their desserts.

Maybe that's not a dessert.

>> CORRECT! [ Fish and Chips is an appetizer, not a dessert. :) ~ T. Camille ]

These are I like to try these country's dessert.

>> These are the desserts from other countries that I want to try.