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윤영선/2024-02-23

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One of the most memorable things in college was that I went around looking for delicious restaurants with my college friends to eat. For lunch, I usually went to school cafeteria. After school, we had a great time going to famous restaurants around the university. There were few restaurants around the school that I hadn't been to. There is a restaurant that sells beef, pork, and kimchi stew near the school. It is a restaurant that I used to go to with my friends. We still meet there every six months at the restaurant where we have our memories.

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Good work, Mia. Thank you for sharing a nice memory from your college years. ^^

-Khai

One of the most memorable things in college was that I went around looking for delicious restaurants with my college friends to eat.

>> One of the most memorable things about college was that I went around looking for delicious restaurants with my college friends to eat at.

For lunch, I usually went to school cafeteria.

>> For lunch, I usually went to the school cafeteria.

After school, we had a great time going to famous restaurants around the university.

>> CORRECT

>> We had a great time going to famous restaurants around the university after school.

There were few restaurants around the school that I hadn't been to.

>> There were a few restaurants around the school that I hadn't been to.

There is a restaurant that sells beef, pork, and kimchi stew near the school.

>> CORRECT

It is a restaurant that I used to go to with my friends.

>> CORRECT

>> That’s the restaurant that I used to go to with my friends.

We still meet there every six months at the restaurant where we have our memories.

>> CORRECT

>> We still meet there every six months at the restaurant where we have good memories.